|Reviews for Poems|
| wolfen princess chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
The first three lines I like, but the fourth I think would be better if you shortened it. For example:
A good taste
Also, you kind of repeat yourself three times, by saying the chocolate looks like a coin, it's looks real, and it's realistic. I'm not sure, however, what kind of route you would want to go to fix that, if you even choose to...
But I like the simplicity of the poem (and I really like those coins)