Reviews for I became a flower after you left
metal butterfly chapter 5 . 2/27/2011
a ghostly review a year and a half later:

I have creeped a lot of your work

and I don't imagine you with a father.
wayfaringstrangers chapter 2 . 9/27/2009
wayfaringstrangers chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
can be interpreted in many different ways.
Little girl Big world chapter 3 . 9/1/2009
It is hot in California! I kind of just want it to be fall/winter already so the fires and scorching hot weather will be done.
Little girl Big world chapter 2 . 9/1/2009
This seems really personal and is pretty short so I don't really know what to pull from it. I like the line, "even when spoken just above a whisper" though. Nice.
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
This is short but there seems to be a lot more to it than can be said in two lines.