Reviews for The Bowler Hat Man
mangareaderperson chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
awesome suspense and freaky... at the end most of it

i love the way how you create a realistic image on our heads while we read it

nice one :D
acorn2oak chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
I enjoyed your story. I think your writing has a lot of promise. If I were to make any criticism, and I'm not sure I'm qualified, I'd have to say I'd like to read more description of what the bowler hat guy did to the kid, maybe get some reasoning behind what he was doing. It left a slight "huh?" feeling after I read it. Very nice imagination, though. Thanks! Keep up the good work!