|Reviews for Fanfare|
| Tomihatsu chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
I really liked this, the way you put "stretching" helped me visualize the scene.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
"its wing before you."... shouldn't it be wings?
I like the format here. I'm not normally a fan of formatting like that in a haiku, but it was a nice touch, stretching out the word stretching.
I like the title, it adds to the piece. The piece describes it well, but the only thing is the line break between the first and second line seemed to in the middle of a thought just for the syllable count. Other than that though, nicely done!
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| Mirabella chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
I can just see it!