|Reviews for Living Death|
| InkWitch chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
i dont think u want to hear how awesome u r anymore xP
| risaisis chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
I liked this one, especially the last two lines. Very deep and profound. :)
| LilyWolfe chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
Definitely my favourite of your poems, i like the flow of it and when i was reading it the pace quickened towards the end right up until the best line "Living among the alive"...it's haunting and makes me pensive. i love it!
| SilentVoices chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
I liked it a lot. Will definitly favorite.
I really liked the lines:
"Dead smiles for the sake of others"
"Living among the alive"
Great work and thanks for sharing. :)
| Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
"Dead among the living,
Living among the alive"
loved the toying with words, good job! :P