Reviews for Shrinkage
SomeoneToLove chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
This is great! I especially like the part about the oak. For some reason, I really love trees in poems...Anyway, nice work on this poem!
SilentVoices chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
Ver descriptive. I liked the idea of tears watering the earth and the curling up in your rib cage. I thought that this poem was very well written. Nice work and thanks for sharing.