|Reviews for The Chaste Courteasan|
| Travels-in-Time chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
Wow. This is some powerful writing. Well done to you on a beautifully written piece. Good luck with your assignment
| eaststar chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
"‘Then they will slit its throat so the blood away from the altar.’ I asked, as if I didn’t already know." You might want to put in a question mark between altar and I asked to make it sound more like a question.
Secondly, you shouldn't put in so much dialogue (unless that is for effect." Add details, how did Athens look? Make a picture in the reader's head!
Hope this helps!