Reviews for School
reobessed chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
did not get the last line the first time i read it but i did the second time i read it. cool poem
Peachesandcream15 chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Me too :)Short and sweet
PurpleRoxMySox chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
Thanks for the smile :) it's great to know I'm not the only one (Yeah. I like school. Crazy, right?). By the way, thanks for the review on my story :). Okay, here's the actual review: I loved the rhymes you used (They made sense! I don't read much poetry, but I like when it makes sense). All I can spot is just a bit of grammar, like maybe adding some commas (If you like stuff like that; I have a natural tendency to use commas religiously). But, all in all, it was very good.
Lilium Nocturne chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
Very Cute!
Arisa Hanari chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
lol.. i didn't expect that XD it's cute. reminds me of someone that i used to know. 8D
SarahMerriman chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
First of all, please excuse my horrible spelling.

Second of all, the first stanza was very confusing to me, but I find the second stanza quite fasanating. The rhyme on every line makes it stand out and it has nice rythm. The last stanza is quite humorous.

When looking at the stanzas seperate they are pretty decent, but they seem like they are pieces of seperate poems that happen to be on the same subject.

All in all, I think with a couple of tweeks this poem could be pretty good. Keep writing :)
Ms.Sweet Pea chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
I like the easy flow. And this did make me smile :D.! your like a college with your vocabulary!
Indigo1100 chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
Cool! I really like the second verse. Oh, and AYE on the cookies thing.
Leviticus II chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
I can easily relate to this. :) lol, I laughed pretty hard. that's awesome. Thanks for the poem
Medusa's.Protege chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
ha, if my big sis read this, she could relate,(don't tell her I said that, she would kill me((I'm serious))
Bagoosa chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
Haha, it's funny! :)

But I'm a nerd and even I don't want to go to school. ;)
oHriginal chapter 1 . 12/14/2009

that was funny! as promised!

thank you for reviewing HIM&ME... I always make a point of reviewing those who take time out to read my stuff

Great poem though!

I usually hate this kind of stuff, but I'm glad I read it
Saurosuchus chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
ha, this was pretty cute. but a smile on my face.
vitriolicvermilion chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
Ah, the ode to the nerd.

While the rhyme scheme had a tendency to be on the edge of clumsy in places, I liked that idea a lot and it really had a cute message. (:
Johnathan Lawless chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
I like the premise of the poem, i too felt this way about school when I was younger. Finally after a long break I'm ready for college. (Yay! I start in the spring) anywho I like the poem. I had a little trouble finding the rhythm though. In poems its okay to not be grammatically correct sometimes if it helps the flow. I think that's why Shakespeare used so many e'ers and t'was's lol. And by the way you shouldn't be affraid of copyright when you post something you automatically attain one. To copyright is to place words ideas or thoughts in any tangible form. And since the website posts the date you can always prove that something was yours first.
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