Reviews for Pain
Kiss Of Dawn chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
Wow. I can't think of words to describe it, it's just 'wow'. I like it though. :)
tiger002 chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
Wow, that was darker than I expected from you, but you did it well. You had read instead of red so you might want to fix that. Really good though, and the flow is done well. So sad, and just a great poem.
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
...wow! great poem! liked the last 4 lines! ;)
Myrix chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
Beautiful. Just not in the happy way. Its sad and there are a million poems like this about pain but when you were talking about satan and God it gave it a twist.

I like it!
Disabled Account sdf chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
You conjure up some strong images here. The poem is dark and painful, but very well written!