|Reviews for Pastor Ray: An Introduction|
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
‘I’ve known you only the span/of four threads of thought’ I loved your use of the word ‘threads’ in that verse. Threads by nature are very thin and it makes me think that this person is either not spending a lot of time thinking about the narrator, or they have a false concept of time.
Overall I really enjoyed this piece, the theme of love/loss was very strong, and I liked how your narration wasn’t pushy. The verse felt natural, and even a bit conversational. Everything came together very well.
Jules, via the Review Marathon (link in my profile)