|Reviews for Lost Friendship|
| PunkFunk chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
I see loads of potential
and I can relate to this poem completely
Keep the work!
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
"You my princess,"... You, my princess
"I cannot bare to see you hurt,"...bear
"Not even a rustle in your skirt,"... I liked that line. The word rustle was an interesting choice.
I think the rhyming was a bit odd. It rhymed it certain places but not others. Still, the piece was really bittersweet. Well done.
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| WestCoastIsHome chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
hahaha i like this one too! hahahahah what now? hahhahha there is still one more that i need to read! hahhahahaha im hungry! hhahahahhahahahahh i say hahahahhahahhahah alot dont i hahahahhahahahhahahahh so should i start with a mhaw instead? idont no lets try it i dont no i think i like yeh i deffintly stiking whith hahahahahahahahahahahah