Reviews for Shakles of Conscience
WileE chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
Its ok.. not one of your best, but gets the message across. I'm not sure I like the last line tho.. doesn't seem to tie in to the rest / mood of the poem... Just my opinion.
Simbara chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
Nice. really cool.

:D -Sim-
with eyes looking up chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
that last line deserves the internet.




Solemn Coyote chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
That last line really holds this together. Maybe work a bit more on developing the emotion in the body of the poem, but stick with the framework you have. It might be simple, but it's a complete statement.

DerangedxandxSarcastic chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
I really liked this, it reminds me of someone I know, or rather how I feel about that certain someone. Great job on this, that last line was perfect.