Reviews for The Missing Rocking Chair
Dakota chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
A work of poetic genius.
Narq chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
Lol! I literally burst out laghing. "oh, Look, there's a terminte". Like, yeah, A terminte could eat an entire chair... a FAT termite!

but still, nicely done, lovely ending, and wonderful poem!
Only10dollars chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
This is awesome. You're awesome.
awake and dreaming chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
you are so clever.


how simple and to the point.

great story.
sara chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
haha. that's great. dont change it, it's perfect.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
"Oh. Look. There’s a termite."... the punctuation seems odd here. I think it should be "Oh, look."

I like the rhyming, it works well. Not forced. The ending was also great, really funny and unexpected, though I think you'd need more than one termite to eat a rocking chair...

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GeorgyannWayson chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
Wow, this was hilarious lolz. Keep that up!

ranDUMM chapter 1 . 9/4/2009

HAHAHA, really funny! :D I really liked it, short and to the point, but very funny :D Great work! :)

eaststar chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
I like the simplicity to it especially. That really added to the poem. I love it!
Morine chapter 1 . 9/3/2009*sniff*...*sniff*...