|Reviews for Dealing with Grandmas|
| CriticalAcclaim chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
Your gramma is somewhat awful, to be honest. Your punctuation needs work. You're not supposed to use two question marks when asking a question, it's just bad writing.
All in all, the story needs help.
| Spurlunk chapter 2 . 9/13/2009
Well this is certainly unique. I'm interested to see where you take this story next.
| Pumpkin chapter 2 . 9/7/2009
HAHA! he's so desparate, however i still feel bad for him. Old people are evil, cunning manipulators, i mean i'm sure he cud have squeezed an extra $1.50 out of her. lol, i wonder wats gonna happen in the next chapter. "Sh...moth...OW!" lol
| Maggie Fallon chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
Great start! Its good writing and I like the use of the word minion.
Also, I love the elderly, so I knew I would love your story before I even read it! ]
| Pumpkin chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
poor guy. wen old ladies shake hands in agreement like that u know they want 'something' i'm not saying what. but a dollar over minimum wage isn't that bad.
| NekoHikaruChan chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
LOL! This starts out hilarious. Can't wait for chapter two. I spotted a few things with too many pauses here and there, but we all do that, and other than that, it was hilariously funny.