|Reviews for Nacho|
| guest chapter 1 . 4/8
I just love this story, reading it for 3rd time already :)
Please share more of your works if u r still active.
| PLEASE chapter 22 . 3/24
Do you have anymore stories that you wrote, cause I am an ablsolute fan of your writing.
I think that the s** as a bit too dramatic though, but the rest I love!
| MYGOD chapter 24 . 3/24
I am young, and yet I am seeing this...
| ILOVETHIS chapter 12 . 3/24
OMG! I totally love this story, but I think that there should become more connection with Eathen and Addie
| guest chapter 24 . 3/12
It is awesome, really!
Thnx for sharing :)
| ajachowder1 chapter 24 . 8/3/2014
Lovely story and it made me laugh, if that doesn't deserve a favorite I don't know what does! :3
| Aretice N. Treader chapter 24 . 6/7/2014
So... yeah. I can understand Nacho's concern. Ethan's point of view was pretty interesting.
| Aretice N. Treader chapter 23 . 6/7/2014
That was a really cute last-chapter-before-the-epilogue for this story. This story was written very well overall, and there weren't any huge holes in the plot. I really liked Ethan's character development throughout the story, going from the residential bad boy with an inappropriate mind to a very sweet guy who's always there and with a not-so-inappropriate mind. Very well done!
| Aretice N. Treader chapter 22 . 6/7/2014
People do like to jump to conclusions. I think Addie's crazy family is rather endearing. So, there were a couple of punctuation problems, such as missing commas, but this chapter was fine otherwise.
| Aretice N. Treader chapter 20 . 6/7/2014
Um... Addie may not be the brightest crayon in the box. So, I don't really have much to say about this chapter because there are no mistakes that I've found. Anyway, this chapter was all right.
| Aretice N. Treader chapter 19 . 6/7/2014
I have a feeling that something really special is going to happen on Christmas. There weren't any mistakes that caught my eye. This chapter was very well-written from what I could see.
| Aretice N. Treader chapter 18 . 6/7/2014
I hope Addie will stop denying that she likes Ethan because that would just be really sad after all he's done for her, including this. I think it's a good thing that Addie's venting and letting out her frustrations, but I don't think it was right for her to take it out on Ethan. I found one mistake. You wrote that Nacho's always running up to Ethan and liking him, but I think you meant licking in that particular sentence. Other than that, this chapter was really great.
| Aretice N. Treader chapter 17 . 6/7/2014
Just so you know, your writing is still amazing even if you have writer's block. I hope Nacho's okay. I mean, none of this amazing story would have happened if it wasn't for him. Eva's a really great friend to Addie. This chapter was good.
| Aretice N. Treader chapter 16 . 6/7/2014
I watched the video. I love that trash can! So, one mistake that I'll point out is that you spelled Gaby's name as Gabby once, but that's all right. I think Ethan's growing impatient with Addie's denial because he seems to be getting bolder and bolder with each chapter, but that's also his personality. Anyway, this chapter was pretty good.
| Aretice N. Treader chapter 15 . 6/7/2014
Ethan seems to have impeccable timing, doesn't he? I think Addie should get medical attention for her eye, though. I didn't see any mistakes in this chapter. This chapter was really great, even though you had writer's block as you wrote this.