Reviews for doubt
Mirabella chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Love the reference to wings. :)

And also i like how this has a puppet like feel to it, as if someone is pulling the strings. Makes the message stronger. Nicely done. :)
vitriolicvermilion chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
Mm, you've taken the topic of doubt and written something that is, without a doubt, full of emotion and well-written. The flow is good, the tone is emotional yet a little suppressed, which I like. I think it's a nice touch the way it ends-no punctuation giving it just a slight feeling of...doubt.