|Reviews for If At First You Don't Succeed|
| semantics chapter 7 . 4/29/2015
Okay here I am again after reading the previous story with Dave and Nicky. Cliffhanger much? I have a feeling that Dave is back in the picture again, and now Nicky must choose between Jesse or Dave :D since Nicky and Dave didn't even end on bad terms, I have a feeling they might come up again! Anywho I hope you update this story even though it has been a few years. I would love to hear more about Kay and Josh's little life even though you have created for them another background most recently. Great job. Also even though this is clearly a work of fiction I am drawn the characters and can imagine them living their lives in Canada or NY. Haha. It's a testament to your talent.
| whit19 chapter 7 . 9/19/2014
I love this story...oh no I hope nothing is wrong with dave... update soon :D
| morningstorm70 chapter 7 . 9/14/2014
I hope you continue u left it on a really high cliff there
| Atenea217 chapter 7 . 3/10/2014
Ohhh please, will you ever update this story again? :)
| AndTheWholeHeartShrinks chapter 7 . 10/2/2013
Please continue when you have the time! I love this 3
| WandlessWonders chapter 7 . 6/12/2013
whooooooops forgot to login that last review was mine. xD
| Guest chapter 7 . 6/12/2013
wow its been months and what a spot to cliffhang. *rabble rabble rabble* but, great story so glad it didn't end with FYD. I'd also like to mention that I have a great respect for the time and effort you put into developing this whole series. I think you are quite talented and can't get enough. eagerly awaiting the next update :P
| MandaMae928 chapter 7 . 4/28/2013
Hi, I've just come across your stories this past couple days. I read Faster You Fall and now this and I was wondering if you were going to continue this story cuz it was just getting good and then stopped. I'd love to experience more of Nick's World.
| LiveAndLetDie chapter 7 . 1/28/2013
Wow. That's all I can say. I absolutely LOVED your stories (I think I've read most of the Complications ones and both of Nicky's). I stayed up until four in the morning last night reading Like It Or Not. I loved everything, the plot, the characters, the writing style, I'm amazed that I finally found another story this amazing that's self-published (they're usually incredibly bad). I hope you post more chapters of this story, although if you don't I totally understand.
By the way, for you to understand how much I loved your stories, I made an account to favorite and write a review. 3
Thank you for an awesome read.
| minipou chapter 7 . 1/26/2013
What does Dave want? I want to know! Hope you're continuing this story, I'd really like to know what will happen to our Nicky. Good Job, I love your stories.
| heyitsstupidme chapter 7 . 1/25/2013
I hope you will continue this. I really enjoyed reading it and all the awkward moments made me laugh. :)
I like that all of these stories about Kay and Josh and Nicky are connected. It's like you've created those characters not just for a short amount of time, but you tell us about their lives like they really exist.
| goudacheese chapter 7 . 9/16/2012
I'VE LITERALLY READ ALL OF THE COMPLICATIONS SERIES (A WHILE AGO, TOO) AND I NEVER GOT AROUND TO REVIEWING ANYTHING WHICH IS SUPER DUMB but I just wanna tell you that I love this (and I love LION too) (and I love basically everything) but it's late right now and I have nothing particularly coherent to say except that I hope FYD does continue to ... continue ... because! I love Nicky! And, um, maybe I'll come back when I'm actually awake and review everything or at least more than one thing more helpfully and, um, yeah. Okay. But. Okay. This was the dumbest review ever and I apologize but, yeah.
| creature101 chapter 7 . 8/14/2012
JUST SPENT ALL DAY READING FYF AND NOW I NEED YOU TO UPDATE THIS BECAUSE I NEED MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEE! I NEED ME SOME NICKY/JESSIE LOVEEEEEEEEE. And I really want to know why Dave is calling! And now I'm going to go read MTY because a younger Josh and Kay sounds awesome.
HURRRRRRYYYYY ANNNDDD UPPPPPPDDAAATTEEE! (please)
| Lenko chapter 7 . 8/10/2012
So glad it's back! I can't wait to see how Nicky's changed and I reeeeally want to know what the call was about now! Update as soon as you can! :)
| Nuitdemeztli chapter 7 . 8/10/2012
Im so glad that youve updated! :D