I love this one shot way too much. Must have read it for the 10th time. You write so well. I am in love with your character thoughts while reading.

quite an awesome story. and needless to say, badass.

This was awesome!

Wow, this was soo cute. Luke's thought process almost reminds of me of "tsunderes"! .
How he keeps saying that he hates her and then kisses her. I liked it because it was so different from all the other clichés!,

That was so sweet.

I love this :-)

oh god! that was waaay too funny!
and the way he said, "We're badasses, sweetheart." .DIED! xD

Luke's personality is the meaning of perfection. He's one of those guys that act all tough but he's really soft and caring on the inside. My kind of guys. Heh.
I had absolutely no idea what I was reading until about one fourth of the way into this story. I reread the first few paragraphs about a thousand times. I started over so many times because it was so confusing. I didn't understand a thing about how Luke's thoughts worked until a little later where I started to get used to it.
It was a bit humorous so that's good. I really enjoyed mushy Luke though. Kari is definitely a lovable character to me. I don't know what it is about her, maybe it's because she doesn't force herself on Luke or maybe she quite like me, the type that ups and goes when they're unhappy/pissed about something.

With love,
my princess ending

I liked this story a lot! I love hate/love stories and Luke and Kari's story was no exception. I love how he cares about her, but tries to make it seem like he doesn't. His point of view was really funny, too :)

God , I love you too Luke ! This was hilarious :)

AGGGHH GAHHHHHHHHH THIS IS SO ADORABLE

LOLOL. That last line cracked me up! That whole "sweetheart" thing, I mean. Hahaha. And I'm kind of glad you didn't add in Luke realizing his feelings, because that does seem to happen in every story, so this kind of almost-together ending was actually kind of refreshing.

I love that this is written in the male POV! Excellent touch. It makes it a unique read in itself!

love it :)

Okay, do you even know how much I'm in love with this? Somehow you've managed to write the male perspective in such a humorous and realistic way and I'm so glad I clicked on this! There were times when I burst out laughing and of course I loved the ending. So cute, so funny, aaaand so favorited. :)