I loved that, it was so cute and crazy reading it from his perspective. Very creative, well done!

Hello, it's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo. Your one-shot has been added to the site, so congratulations. :D Here's your raving review:

This one-shot is like a fresh breath of humor and the witty dialogue keeps you smiling the whole way. A guy is telling the story here, and even with the fluff and the bad boy cliche, it managed to make itself realistic.

XOXO,

Juliet

I. Love. This.

So much in fact that I've shown it to some of my other net buddies and they all love this too. There are so many lulz, and the style of this is so freaking awesome; so many bits cracked me up when I read this.

Although I have to admit that it took a little for me to get into it, especially at the beginning when the narrator kept on repeating that he was bada$s as that did grate on me at first. And also, for some reason I found the opening paragraph beginning "only pathetic losers..." a little confusing too, as it seemed to stumble a little.

But that did not detract from my overall enjoyment of this fic and the subsequent favouriting

hahahahha! love this!

Hahhaha x]

I liike xDD

WOOT! Loved it! So awesome! :)

The last five lines made up for the whole story.

i read this about a year ago or sumthing and woz gonna fav it but then sum how completely lost it and have been lookin 4 it ever since. 2day i found it. obviously. IM SO FREAKING HAPPY RIGHT NOW! geez i love this! i love luke, hes so funny. lol.

toodleloo

luke is so adorable. LOL.

i like all your one-shots (and i am terribly sorry for not reviewing every single one of them) i'm a bad girl :D

"We're badasses, sweetheart." - that just cracked me up :))

I love how the guy thinks that he really is a badass that it makes me crack up so bad! :DD Love it!

i so uber duper love the ending. though the whole story felt like it's a badass girl who's narrating, but u pulled it thru the ending. good job!

I LOVE THIS.

I love Luke (great name) and how he's so convinced that he's a badass, when clearly he's really not all that tough. Obviously. I mean, dimples? Haha. Cute.

Kari is great, too. I also really like the whole thing with Danny. It makes me laugh how Luke thought she was in love with him because she let him borrow her pens. "And besides, she always gave Danny Mullins really nice pens to borrow. I asked her for one once, and she gave me one with hardly any ink. Coincidence? I think not." Priceless. xD

Anyway. The ending line fantastic. And I know I'm being redundant. I just can't think of anything else to say, it was that good! Haha.

Awesome job. Loved it.

-Kyllex

Thats a pretty good one shot. It's funny that he tries so hard to convince everyone and himself that he's a badass.

luke is amazzing love him and his conflicting internal dialogue!

I love this! I love how it was so obvious from the start that Luke liked Kari, but he was always trying to cover it up to seem like a badass. Some lines I particularly enjoyed:

"Some idiot decided to draw a big penis on the gym floor, right underneath the hoop, in a red Sharpie marker and Danny Mullins just about had heart palpitations when he saw it. Though now that I think about it, he might not have been reacting to the vandalism of his beloved court, but instead realized that the sight of other men's parts turned him on"

I had to take a moment to laugh at this.

And the last line:

"Oh, God, I love myself."

It was all just so Luke. I mean, it's only a one-shot and you've perfectly showed what kind of character Luke is, and every line that he thinks is just perfect. Great job!