Reviews for Badasses Don't Walk on Sunshine
Jade Q. Dean chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
It's cute! Don't fuss over it, lol
jenjen-0 chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
Ah this was so awesome! I love how he was acting all badass, and then he's got those dimples and everyone poking them!
taichcha chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
Loved it! I just wish it were longer...

keep writing!
Marie Charlotte chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
Cute! And not cliche.

I liked it Mah friend.
balloonfista chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
Loved it! So cute.

You use humour ina really good, subtle kind of way. I love your style of writing.

SparklingStar25 chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
That was so cute!

I loved it! And even more so cuz it was from Luke's pov!
Pop the Bubble chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
Don't worry about it :)

I thought it was excellent anyway!

Love it :D I especially love Luke. Coincidentally, my cousin and I were arguing yesterday about how 'badass' he is (he's really not)
MistressBlack852 chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
omg.. that is SUCH a CUTE (just like luke's dimples ;P) oneshot!

i absolutely loved it! esp that it was wrong a guy's pov and it was SOO hilarious

he's such a badass ;)
asianinvasion0530 chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
Hahaha that was hilarious. I loved it! And I loved how it was in a guy's point of view 'cause you don't see that too often. But anyways, if I ever met Luke I'd probably get really annoyed of him thinking he's a badass haha. But it adds to the humor of the story so whatever.
superficialSagacity chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
I'm sorry to have to use such a juvenile term, but OMG!

That was a great story! :D Not only was it cute, the fact that Luke had such an interesting point of view, made it so enjoyable...

AND...I loved how he thought he was all badass and was jealous of Danny Mullins, whom Kari didn't like anyway.

One point though, in the very last part, you called her Katie instead of Kari...

"And what are we, then?” Katie asks, thoroughly amused."

Overall though, I loved it! :D
Katie Valentine chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
I can imagine Luke, he must be so cute! :D Omg, I can't resist dimples! LOOL. :D
goldenspork chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
Actually, he could have a family if he were a badass serial killer, because half the time the dudes who go around killing...serially...are guys who live in Suburbia with cats and a wife and two kids. Like on Criminal Minds sometimes. So, theoretically he could be a badass secret serial killer. :)

This was really funny though. I liked Luke, and it was believable, because sometimes you run across those stories that are just completely unlikely. This one could actually conceivably happen in real life. :P Anyway. To stop rambling I'll just say, "Good read."
Brielle Gemson chapter 1 . 9/7/2009

you remind me of one of my friends ] good story!
Ravina chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
Luke's thoughts about being a badass just cracked me up non-stop!

Great one-shot!

- Rebekah
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