Reviews for She Walks
letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
You convey time passing really well with the contined references to walking and things eroding away. She seems so lonely and lost! But resigned. You write so well! I realy like your third last paragraph where yo say: "They are thousand storms ripping apart her insides; they are a million people screaming out their lungs." You can just feel it, see it. *claps loudly*
A.J. Chaos chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
That is some piece of fine work there. Very well written I would say. .