OH MY LORD THESE CLIFF HANGERS ARE KILING ME! LOL UPDATE SON PLEASE! D ASAP!

I love this story. I'm glad she finally worked up the courage to talk to Gray about the kissing incident in the stairwell. I hope they can move on past this now, although she has a point about kissing him and being sent home to New York once more. I hope it works out though, because she deserves to be happy, especially witha ll she's had to handle over the past few months.

Aw! kiss kiss kiss! haha, great! :)

I love it.

I was so tense when Grey was gone.

Demetrie will die.

Lorianna will too :) after she marries a poor old guy that gives her like 20 kids.

Jennifer will NOT return to her world if she kisses Grey. She's assumed something that's nonexistant I guess?

Thanks for updating. Awesome as always!

Hi, I'm a 15 year-old writer and I am proud to say that your fiction was awesome, spectacular! However, you have left me in nohing but suspense. Will Jen fall off the cliff? Will Gray rescue her one more? Are they finally going to kiss? I am anxious to find out. I would love if you continued writing so that I could continue to enjoy the story. Please, I'm begging. Don't leave me hanging. Thanks again for the awesome story.

DAMMIT! I've been waiting for twenty eight chapters for him to finally kiss that girl and now I gotta wait! I love this story, it's so wonderfully easy to read and well put together. I'm normally a skimmer, but I've read every single word of this story and can't get enough of it!

Finally! I was getting a wee bit annoyed at Jennifer and her wiffle waffling! It was well done, good tension but thanks for finally relieving it. Putting it off for much longer would have ruined it. I laughed when Gray finally used some slang. "Kinda." lol. :)

you cant let her die! it would end the story and its not done yet!

*gasp* uh oh! :o

To crazy, too crazy love this chapter update faster woman. lol. But seriously need the next chapter fast.

I really love this story and am glad i decided to read it. I want the war to happen and Gray and Jen to kiss. I do not know what will come of the kiss, but I do know I want it to happen nevertheless. Please update soon! I want to know how he saves her from falling off the cliff. :)

Ok... not to kill the mood or anything

but has she forgotten she's meant to go back to reality?

sorry, but jennifer REALLY annoys me, just tell him about loriana!

you seriously stopped it at this point?

like rally what type of monster are you! lol JP

love it keep the chapters rollin

OH. MY. GOSH.

Please tell me you're updating soon. No wait, as your faithful reader I demand that you update immediately. GAH. you left me at a literal cliff hanger! Well I still love Gray, and I don't think it was him making out with Lorianna, either that or she threatened him with hurting Jennifer and that's why he did it. Or maybe Jennifer caught Lorianna making a move on him and he pushed her away without realizing Jennifer had seen. I refuse to believe my Gray would kiss a pig.

I'm so happy you updated. As always amazing. I can't believe Jennifer doesn't tell him about Demetrie's threat to her in regards to Gray and how she saw him kissing Lorianna, but then I have to remember that this is fiction and I can't really be so worried about a fantasy story now can I.

I'm just a sucker for romance.

Well, you're story rocks. I hope Jennifer doesn't die, if she does well I wouldn't mind taking her place. Haha.

Thanks for the amazing story.

Will check soon for updates: translation: extremely anxious for an update.

oohh gosh. watta Cliff hanger! (would that be a pun? ;P)

haha

thanks so much for the chapter! :)