Reviews for There is no Prince Charming! |
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TrueBelle chapter 24 . 2/9/2010 yay!jennifer is away from the price! :) |
sillygoose2008 chapter 23 . 2/9/2010 oh god every chapter is better then the last can't take me eyes of the screen. |
xXvamp-obsessionXx chapter 23 . 2/9/2010 I think Demetrie should go DIE. He should get transported back to New York with Jennifer and then get run over by a bus. And then shoved off a building. A tall one. Gray had better do something to stop this wedding from happening, and did he really kiss Lorrianna? Somehow I find it hard to believe. She never really saw his face, after all, she just heard Lorianna say his name, which she could totally have just been doing to piss Jennifer off, right? Oh and while you're at it Victor can get run over by a bus too. Twice. And then shoved off an even taller building. Despite my negative feelings for those characters, I love this story. I know it may not seem like it, but I do. I mean come on, I hate all the bad characters haha. Please update soon! |
slowdear chapter 23 . 2/8/2010 I think Jennifer is taking the kiss between Gray and Lorianna too hard. It was only a kiss, nothing overly dramatic, especially since she's not from the same time period as them, people do much worse now. I really hate to say this but Jennifer seems really pathetic crying over losing Gray. He was there for her but she didn't take that chance. Anyway, her crying over Gray was kind of annoying. I feel bad for Jennifer's situation. But seeing as how the rebels took over the church, that means there's going to be a war? It must be Gray's sister that is leading the rebels and maybe the rebels who are going to be the ones to stop the wedding. Thank you so much for another great chapter. Looking forward to the next one. |
LittleLadyLoveless chapter 23 . 2/8/2010 Something like, more, faster? . |
scharlie18 chapter 23 . 2/8/2010 EK! |
Lina K chapter 23 . 2/8/2010 Ok, so this is my take on what happened... Lorianne wasn't making out with Gray, she was with victor and she fantisized that it was Gray that's why she said "gray" as they were making out and victor turned around thinking that gray was behind them... Or lorianne might have seen Jen and said gray on purpose just to tick Jen off.. I think Jen didn't understand or see who it truly was, she is basing it off assumptions... Anyway, I see this turning out to me an objection wedding.. You know , the kind where the guy runs in and screams "I object!" hahhaah.. |
alananova chapter 23 . 2/8/2010 I picture Jennifer stealing a sword, a horse and breaking out of the castle to join the rebels against that prick Demetrie. She needs to learn to be strong in her own way. Gray can find her if he has a heart. I AM SO ADDICTED! |
Writinglovestories21 chapter 24 . 2/8/2010 YOU HAVE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME! I AM SCREAMING RIGHT NOW! AH!... Ok, I'm calm but seriously, a wedding? That's horrible? And what's with gray and miss annoying? AH! Other then that great story :) haha |
MuseofMagic chapter 23 . 2/8/2010 Gr! That didn't explain anything about Gray and Lorianna damn it! I want that explanation more than stuff about stupid Demetrie and a wedding that will most likely not take place... it better not take place! Anyway, good stuff all the same. Update again soon and get to Gray and the explaining-ness! ~ Caiti |
animegirl214 chapter 23 . 2/8/2010 oh no! she should just kill him and then run away! ;P lol thanks for the chapter! can't wait till the next one! :D |
vampy08 chapter 23 . 2/8/2010 omg she said yes wtfh! |
AlphaCole chapter 23 . 2/8/2010 I wondering if the brother and sister both are blckmailing. I' thinking Lorianna said soemthing to get him to do that. I can only pray that's hs excuse. PRAYING |
TrueBelle chapter 22 . 2/6/2010 aw man, y did she have to walk into that. now she's jumping to conlusions. i hope gray finds her and makes up with her. darn that lorianna. a princess isn't suppose to do tht. |
Im Just Mlssundaztood chapter 22 . 2/6/2010 loved the chapter. So both cheated on her. This is probably the best, than she can figure out who she really loves. Not just some kind of illusion. The prince is blackmailing her, I see this going bad. Can't wait til next chapter. -I'm Just Mlssundaztood |