Reviews for There is no Prince Charming! |
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steph chapter 35 . 2/1/2010 wait! i'm confused, what blue glint in his eye? was that the necklace? |
MuseofMagic chapter 35 . 2/1/2010 Aw it was so short ;-; I want more Jen-Gray-nes! And god damn I mean OBVIOUSLY if her necklace is glowing and it shows when she wants something and Gray is all lustful and wanting to kiss her she should just kiss the damned boy! -grumbles- And in answer to your little A/N question there I've wanted TONS of characters to be real. All the time. -nods- Characters are sexy and always readable (no pun intended!) whereas real guys, not so much. Oh well... Update again soon! ~ Caiti |
HideAndGoSeek chapter 35 . 2/1/2010 I don't think it's possible for me to NOT like a chapter of this story. They're all just so amazingly awesome! do I ever wish I could make a character real? Yeah. Gray. I love him! Oh man. He's like the perfect guy! PLEASE update sooner! I REALLY need to read more! I can just imagine Gray showing up at the ball and kissing her right there! Sigh...*dreamy look* then the happy ending that you WILL have *gives stern look* Anywho! Update soon! HGS |
PoppySeeds chapter 35 . 2/1/2010 I've wanted a thousand characters to be real. Mr. Darcy, Snape, the list goes on. :) Poor Gray. I thought of something - how did they go swimming when it was winter? Secret magical fantasy land swimming, that's a good enough reason. Nice job. :D |
SunlitSky chapter 35 . 2/1/2010 Jennifer has been so irritating the last few chapters, I always want to scream at her "How can you be so dense?". Not all characters fall in love with the king, and when they do, the king doesn't cheat on them! Even if I do sound like an angry, raging reader, I'm enjoying this story immensely and love reading each new chapter- hopefully Jennifer will see the light. I love Grey, he's a fabulous character. :) |
sillygoose2008 chapter 7 . 2/1/2010 This is intersecting it seems that Delbrook is a very secluded place and no visitors. |
sillygoose2008 chapter 6 . 2/1/2010 aw man i wanted to see her new york unleashed all over that chick. lol. |
sillygoose2008 chapter 5 . 2/1/2010 Can't believe he tied her with irons and a rope this just gets better and better poor girl just wanted to help. |
sillygoose2008 chapter 4 . 2/1/2010 This Mary girl seems important can't wait to find out. |
SeaJade Song chapter 34 . 2/1/2010 im rooting for Gray! |
Valentina chapter 34 . 1/31/2010 I don't know how long I'll be able to wait until you update, but somehow I'll make it. I really didn't likee Demetrie..from the beginning, he was too nice. Your characters are very well developed, I'm totally imagining myself as Jennifer, just because I wish Gray was real. I'm a hopeless romantic, but sometimes I want to kick Jennifer, she needs to let herself go, its great for the story, but it eats away at me everytime she turns Gray away. Your story is amazing, and I cannot wait for the next chapter. Will she go to the ball? I hope not, I think Demetrie is going to kidnap her, and Gray, to force Jennifer to do something while threatning to kill Gray and Demetrie's not so nice sister will cackle wildly in the background. Will Gray's sister come into play here? Will Jennifer realize that she loves Gray, kiss him, and get sent back to her world. That'd make me very angry. Jennifer would turn into a bitter old woman, because the love of her life is in a nonexistant world. GAH. See, this story is driving me insane. You need to update soon! LOVE IT! Your writing is amazing by the way. |
MuseofMagic chapter 34 . 1/31/2010 Ugh, Demetrie. What does that sleaze ball have up his sleeve? I know that 'gift' isn't a good thing. And it hurts me how painfully obvious Jennifer and Gray are and yet Jennifer is as thick as a brick wall. -sighs- Anyway, great story so far, keep it up! I look forward to your next update! ~ Caiti |
Lina K chapter 25 . 1/31/2010 Ok so this is my prediction... Jen is going to kiss gray and be returned back to her time era. She will wake up and find out is was all a dream... Then she'll call maggie and tell her that she is willing to talk to Noah's friend and give love a shot afterall... Maggie will set up a blind date and Jen will see that the guy looks exactly like Gray! She will end up with gray! :) or Jen will some how accidently bump in to gray in the streets of NY! Hahahah just some prediction |
sillygoose2008 chapter 3 . 1/30/2010 claire seems nice i wonder what kind of trouble she is in. |
sillygoose2008 chapter 2 . 1/30/2010 I love how the story moves not to fast and to slow just enough to get you going for more. |