I like it the 1st chapter got me into it I want to read it all.

this story rocks!

very awesome ! i like it very much really keep it up and update soon ! and thank u for da update !

I really hope she doesn't go to that stupid ball to see that stupid Demetrie...poor bloody Gray lol

Dorkie here :):D

luv this(lyk always):D

n Y did u make jen SO DENSE...My GOD! :D shes lyk not realizing GRAY is her man...NOT demetrie! n plus, after demetrie hurt her so god-awful much, HOW could she run back to him just for a dance...okay i know i know she needs to get home but gr...GRAY can help her do that :D...:):):)POOR GRAY! i wanna hug him (cant do it i know lolz)

hm...this "complication" is getting me frustrated sweety :D:D:D

n lyk always: gr8 chapter (oh JEN plz realize ur destiny!)

TC Sweety :D

Dorkie is offically done with the review :D

Wah, this is so exciting! I'm dying to find out what happens next. Jen is really dense sometimes... xD But I suppose that's easy for an onlooker to say. When you actually find yourself in the middle of it all, it's usually way harder to see things clearly.

Anyway, please keep up the good work! I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter. *w*

I am really enjoying your story, although it is sort of starting to drag on now. She has camplained about her having to kiss demitrie again for the last 4 chapters. She has already kissed him many times, and he was with another woman. It's slightly anoying. She starting to sound like a whinning child, and I mean no offence. You have a good story and are a great writter, I just think that the plot needs to move on a bit faster.

Finished this in two days.. AMAZIING! Gimme more!

gah. I wanna slap that girl upside the head.

She doesn't need Demetrie. She needs to get busy with Gray.

Great chapter

sorry to say but this is pathetic. Just don't go! who cares if she doesn't go? She'll show him how sorry he should be.

Jennifer belongs with gray. She needs a better head on her shoulders...

ugh! y is she being so stupid right now? isn't like in her mid twenties or something. it's just really sad to read about tht. poor gray. :(

I would love for her to show up to see he's kissing someone else and run into the forest or something then Gray shows up because he followed her to make sure she was okay then everything was good again! haha. Again, as always, love it!

AHH! tension! not cool! but the story is amazing! Can't wait for the next chapter! I think she should just forget about Demetrie and stick with Gray. She could be happy in this book if she had him :)

HGS

Why is she so dumb right now! Omg! Obviously its supposed to be the healthy dose of drama within a story, but as many times as ive read it, nothing can stop the aggravation. She is being way way way too simple minded, but also over thinking everything at the same time. Like...Crap! I just want her to be smart now :[ But noo, I have to go through more gut wrenching agony for her to be enlightened. I could cry! Doesn't she realize that after all of the kisses she's had with Demetrie, even when he claimed to love her, she has yet to go home? I enjoy this story immensely, even if Im dieing because of it. Lol. I'm ready for it now.

Yes! WHO is it?

They can never catch a break, can they?

Can't wait til next chapter.

-Im Just Mlssundaztood