Yup. Problem.

In a way princess whats her face is right, she IS seducing him. :P

Keepin an eye on that prince. :P

The princess seems like the type to get really flamed if you just ignored her like you were above her. :D

Ah. Derek was to be a douchbag turned "tolerable" after falling in love with Mary.

Those Xenophobes.

I feel theres an American crack in there. :P Shame.

Well theres a liar revealed plot put in. :P

I dont tust Derek. (is it just me, or are a lot of characters names who start with D scevy? XP)

Wow. Those people are dense. :P

She should mention the part where the prince blackmailed her. It would hav been harder to take her if she was locked away.

Can we say Uh-oh?

Cute and sweet! I really loved Jen and Gray's relationship from the beginning. They were so cute, but I was kinda disappointed when they kissed because it meant that Jen would have to leave Delbrook for Earth T.T

But in the end, I guess Matt's okay too... He's just hiding under a pseudonym XD

Well, I enjoyed reading this.

Cheers,
TQL

this is a really good writing i couldnt stop of my favorite storys.

Awesome story ]

I am so intrigued by this! I love where you're going with this story, and the characters so far are fantastic. This is majorly great!

that was enchanting! the idea was brilliant, and the way you executed it was gorgeous :)
i prefer gray to matt though! gray sounds much more original. :D

I'm surprised that you don't have 1k reviews!

I really think this story deserves more recognition :)

I VERY VERY ENJOYED IT! :D

Gray is sexysexy & the Prince was also sexy at first but yeah..

ERGH.

I think the ending of the story seemed a teeny bit rushed

but overall

I LOVED THIS STORY!

I was always excited to read the next chapter. :)

OMG I LOVE THE FIRST CHAPTER, idk why :O

But hey I love how he chase her :D

Good job!