Derek is such a douche.

I have a feeling that I'm not going to like this Mary person when she's found. Causing all this goddamn problem like some kind of bloody idiot.

What? Who the hell is Mary? What?

aw- the story is so cute

Ah I loved it! Reading your story was what got me through the most difficult part of University for me: the final semester :) Thank you with all my heart.

That was so unexpected! I can't stop reading!

SO GOOD!

I absolutely LOVED this story! You did a fantastic job in composing it. I fell in love with your characters, and yes, occasionally I fell in love with Demetrie. He was so nice in the beginning, but then he turned into a total dickwad. lol

You're right, this chapter is intense. But, I didn't really feel the intensity when I read. I mean, what happened was intense, but the writing was not. I didn't feel the ominisity(if that's a word) building up to the end of this chapter. Maybe you could fix that if you edit this story

This is a really well written and planned story so far. I really love the main character; I imagine most of us 21st century women would react the same in her situation. Good job.

THIS STORY WAS AMAZING! i loved it :)

OMG! amazing story! i love love loveed it! keep up the AMAZING work for future stories!

that is so sweet! but im confused, is she just meeting people who look exactly like the people in the book, but different personalities? or did the book actually bring the characters personalities and looks into the real world so they are the people from the book but just different names n stuff? if it is the first one, then i want the actual Gray! and i love the name Gray!

ok, will u PLEASE just make jenn see that just because Prince Charming has the word Prince in it, doesn't mean that he'll be an ACTUAL prince? its SO ANNOYING! great story!

loved this chapter! i actually laughed out loud when she answered, "Uh...the President?" i love it! ill review more as i keep reading!

Wow oh wow. It is 248 in the morning and I have to wake up in about 4 hours to go to church but I just couldn't stop reading. This is the most creative story I've ever read. You should read this great story about going back in time. Jenns reaction when she came back reminds me of Sydney reaction in the other story. I don't remember the name but do a search for jack oleary (not sure on the spelling) and possibly world war two. It starts of about a picture in a book and its amazing. You'll love it.