Tab: OMG I LOVED IT!

Kla: so poetic.

Nic: BRAVO! *faved!*

Ele: Did it have to end?

Mar: I think I totally didn't do homework for school because I was so engrossed in this. Anyways loved the story!

I really liked this story but I would have liked it better if she actually stayed in the book with Gray. I knew from almost the very beginning that this is how it was going to end but I still hoped it wouldn't and she would stay with him. Anyways you did a really good job on this story.

This was a great twist on the time travel cliche. I really enjoyed the characters; they had a lot of depth to them that made it easy to get sucked in, hate some and love others. I was sad that Jen had to come back to the real world, but it's almost a necessity and I'm glad that the Delbrook characters could have a place in the real world.

Still sad that it ended so quickly but it has a end that makes me happy.

I started reading this during your final update. And I finally finished it today. Wow, congratulations! You did a good job!

I deeply enjoyed this one. It’s a little disappointing that you left the war hanging. It’s like one of those cliffhangers you hate and love.

But you wanna know what your story reminds me of? A Knight in Shining Armor by Jude Deveraux. It’s more on time travel though, but damn, it had me crying in the end! I suggest you read. You’re going to love it!

“I knew now that there was no such thing as Prince Charming. However, as I threaded my arm through his, I was positive that there was such a thing as a Knight in shining armor, and that mine had finally come for me.”

Definitely my favorite line in your story. Because really, knights are hot. They’re badass.

this was a very good story :) can't wait to start your new one (hopefully) and your first fic.

ohmygosh!

All I can say is... AMAZING story. Seriously, it took me just about two days to read it... almost non-stop. It's also nice because I feel like I can kind of relate to Jennifer, in the sense that she didn't want to be in a relationship, but she LOVED reading about people being in relationships. So that was cool.

But, seriously, this was awesome. Gray is amazing and I SO wish I meet someone like him someday! He's so sweet, in a weird way! But sometimes he reminded me of a girl, because of his mood changes and with him being all secretive at times, and maybe not really saying what he truly means. Haha. I thought it was cute :)

So, I think you get what I'm saying. Basically, AMAZING story, AWESOME characters, and yeah.

Oh, and I HATE Demetrie. HATE him. With a burning passion. I hope that if the war really had gone on, that Jen would have pushed him off that stupid cliff that she almost fell off of.

Oh, and I love Claire. And Andrea. They're cool. I approve.

Alrighty, again, and yeah I know I keep saying this, GREAT story!

I'm gonna check out some of your other stories now, and if they're anything like this one, expect a review! :)

The first story on Fictionpress that I've read since about a year ago.

Absolutely entrancing! Love it!

Ok, I've been reading this story all night and I have to get up in three hours, but now that I've finished I think it's important to tell you that it is absolutely wonderful. It's been a long time since I've found a story on fictionpress with such a creative and captivating premise. There are some minor things that annoyed me (as a horseback rider, I cringed everytime a character "slapped the reins" or mentioned "driving the horse"), but the storyline is charming and original. With continued editing I, personally, could see the potential for publication. I hope you keep writing!

this was so beautiful! i loved it..

i actually thought that Jen's grandma was Mary! haha..

I enjoyed this story so much it kept me from my homework! It's been a long time since I've read a good story, so thank you...and I will definitely look into reading some of your other stories. The only thing is, I wish that the original characters had remembered themselves outside of the book because I really liked Claire and Andrea and the original Clay because you got to know them in the story, and outside of the story, you had to get to know them all over again...but that's only me and my complaining mind. Don't take any notice.

This story is so cute! I love how it ended, i was like "aw" Great job! :)

I loved this. I can't explain in words how much I enjoyed this story! Perfect ending by the way. :)

I really liked this ending a lot better! It definitely seemed more conclusive. Great story! Now I only hope that my dreams can come true like hers. :)

"Your hands were too close together," I heard a deep voice say behind me.

My stomach flip-flopped as I turned to find Gray sit on the log next to me, not too close, but still next to me. "What?" I asked.

"When you were sword fighting, your hands were too far apart." He set his plate of food in his lap, staring down at it as if he didn't want to meet my eyes.

Her hands went from too close together to too far apart. :)