Ah, woot! Questions answered, much better. Thank you!

~Caiti

... *giggles* "I love this story!"

Oh Em Gee! I absolutely LOVE this story! It's not everyday you find a good mix of past and present. Gray...er, Matt, ain't so bad either ;)

aw!

now this was definetly good! :D

answered many questions and was a real happily ever after~ ;P

amazing, very cute ending :)

Oh thank goodness! i was a little dissapointed in the ending, but it didn't make me love your story any less :)

Oh. My. GOD. This has frickin kept me on the edge of my seat throughout each chapter. Like for real, i've stayed up past midnight on school nights JUST so i could read more of this (which caused me major lack of sleep). You NEED to get this published. It was INCREDIBLE! Thank you so much for writing it! It has definitely been one of my top favorites!

Love this story and never wanted it to end. So glad for the rewrite ending. Looking forward

Thank goodness. :)

~Lady

Hm... maybe the rewrite...

Hooray!

:)

Looking forward to it!

is there going to be an epilogue? PLEASE?

i love your story! ive been following your story every single day. but i thought at the end there will be more love their meeting, not so great at the ending. im just saying as your avid fan would say. but totally unexpected none the least. ;/

I have to agree with some other reviewers that the ending left a little to be desired. I am glad that she got her "gray" in real life but what happened to everyone else, and what about Mary?

Otherwise congrats on finishing! It's hard to do and so many just leave stories out there with no endings. Like I've said, I enjoyed your clever story and think you have a really good start. You just need a little editing overall. There were some plot inconsistencies (the pond in the winter, I still haven't figured that out). There were quite a few misspellings scattered throughout but I can say that I know first hand how hard that is to notice when you're writing it! I rely on folks to point them out to me so I can fix them. That said, this was in your author's note but it's "definitely" not "definately" because that always reads as "defiantly" to me which makes me laugh. :)

anyway, I'm rambling. Nice work, I vote for epilogue too. I would love to see Jennifer and Gray get a happy ever after (love's true...er...happy ever after?) :D

AW! That last paragraph was gold, and aww I was kinda hoping to read about the epic battle of what should have been epicness. The story felt a little cutoff but not in a bad way, like in the this-isn't-what-you-expected-but-this-is-how-it-should-be way.