Reviews for things like love and anger
Isca chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
"And he's the one for you." I like the tone of this line-it has a rushed, almost breathless quality that's really striking.

"Truth is, best friends can't be lovers." Whoa. That's pretty intense stuff. This line is so true...
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
I really enjoyed this poem. My one suggestion is that you use a bit more punctuation. When read aloud I was really running out of air.
lymli chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
it's always hard to be sincere with the feels.

great poem.