Reviews for Your Decision
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
I liked how scattered the narrative was. You can tell by the way that you put things, that the situation was really a rushed one, and answers needed to be given. For me it felt like this was about writing itself (although I think you meant to anchor it to a relationship angle). For me it had to do with understanding one’s work and not wasting the author’s time. That might have just been me.

I didn’t like how short this piece was. It didn’t feel like you wanted or needed to say more, but it still felt unfinished to me. I think a bit of length would have worked more in its favor then vice versa. Keep up the good work.

Much love,