Reviews for Impression
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
i liked it, simple. not poetish really but it's okay

maybe it needs fleshong out a bit(i think there are words behind it that need to be said), like add more feelings, make the person reading feel the embarassment or fear or whatever they're feeling. or rewrite it in haiku format, it would be simple and would fit there(if you don't wanna include feelings and things of that sort)

hope this helps, peace! :)