Reviews for Enchantress of Sherium Falls |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, I loved this. It was wove very nicely. But you did have a few spelling errors. In the first paragraph you state, "discover trees filled with branches that have vibrant leave(s) of different greens." you need an s at the end of leave. Then farther down you have these sentences, "You could just find the magic that’s there if thou dost believe, however. Is there really such a thing as magic?" It should read: You could just find the magic that's there if thou dost believe. However, is there really such a thing as magic? Other than that I didn't notice anything and love yur writing style, it's very descriptive without being boring. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is so random, but i really liked it! your writing is pretty good! you talked about a thing a first and then another, i know you were decribing this land but you should've related it to the girl...if you get what i mean *_* but overall, i liked it! |