|Reviews for Not My Fault|
| Salinas chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
This reminds me of spoken word poetry (that might be what you were going for).
I like the oxymorons you used..."stilled motion" - beautiful.
I admit, I had to read it over several times to understand it, but I'm not even sure that I understand it at all, or if it is even meant to be understood.
It's quite obscure (which is a good thing), and it definitely made me think! Good job (:
| ambrosia aftertaste chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
i loved the rhythm. its catchy and really pulled me in:)