TheRealmObserver chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
I like the story because I can somewhat relate to being ultra shy from time to time, It's a really nice story although, I think it might help if you'd put a space on what the characters say so it would have that book feeling :)
WoodpeckerWho chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
This was a very cute story :) It flowed well, and had a nice amount of body to it. The characters were sweet and I like the whole 'geeky guy' thing. There was a few small punctuation and grammatical errors, but nothing major. I enjoyed reading it very much!
Neurotic Brilliance chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
Try not to only use capitals. Hard to read. Also, don't make his stutter so much. Besides that, it was good.