|Reviews for TAKEN ALLIE'S RETURN|
| anonymous chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
Ok. Didnt read it yet, but you should put this on , not fictionpress. Andyou should take off the caps, it is really annoying.
| Musa di Apollo chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
Alright, I'm going to be honest. That wasn't good. At all. You shouldn't type in all caps, and should seriously consider revising your work, editing, all that good stuff, and for the love of god PUT IT ON !