Reviews for 10 minutes
KashiRyuu chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
This was so worth the time it took to read it!
FAN chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
wow CaseyBear, do you have any idea how good that was?
JJ chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
Don't know how something so short can tell a complete story but it just did and that was my favorite one-shot of all time. Shows what an awesome writer you are.
ailuv chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
Simply beautiful.
mousegirl05 chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Greetings! It's not often that I enjoyed stream-of-conscious writing, but this one was just perfect. It wasn't over angsty and I really like the way it revolved around the ten minutes. What I also liked was the 'that smile' versus 'this smile'... and the fact that we never received 'real' names for either of the main characters. It kept things subtle and sweet. Anyway, I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing. :)
inreallife chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
This was adorable. One of the best things I've ever read.-Steven
licensed2pok chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
That was so cute! I could feel the anxiety of the main character and...e! cute!

But when he said he was going to break up with his boyfriend, that scared the buh-jeezers out of me! And I know it's supposed to be a happy ending and all, but I can't help but feel a little sad because it seems like after 10 years, he still doubts his boyfriend.

Great oneshot!
marshmallow7 chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
oh wow, this was stunningly beautiful. i really love how the story had the backdrop of tem minutes guiding it. this was my favorite of all your stories
Creeping Collarbones chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
Me again!

First off, AW! OH my, god. You're amazing!

This story was perfection and I want to marry it.

Love love love love! Favorite.
runaway sheet chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
I'd be lying through my teeth if I said I didn't absolutely love this.

It had me so edgy and the time change was very well-done. I didn't find it that confusing and found that the changes actually added to the whole long-time relationship thing.

Other than his name (sorry, Check sounds very high-schooler to me - hope he changed his name 10 years later!), Check was an oddly endearing character. I know peeps like him - you don't know why you like them. You do.

Aiyaa, that whole ten minutes shpiel had me antsy. I was all like, something's going to happen in ten minutes - I just know it. I prefer it this way though. Hehe (obviously I think you wrote this story for me ) Glad you didn't decide to kill anyone off. I wouldn't exactly say this was 'serious' as much as it was one of your more mature works.

Oh, can I -maybe, sorta, please?- adopt you? Hehe, I want my own Casey. Oh man, is that your real name? I just realized I named a character Casey XD Not on purpose though. hehe.

Until next time you.
Jazzy Soul chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
I like this. It's a charming, interesting little one shot.

Good job.
ReeRee123 chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
Wow, that...that was really incredible. The way you wrote it, those back-and-forth moments that gave the story a depth and meaning that you crystallised perfectly at the end. I usually feel the same way about my serious drabbles too - sometimes they seem like a perfect excuse to kill a nameless character and then explore the reactions that'd cause, so I really understand you there. But anyway, I loved this, it was so very mastered and flawless :)
Jester08 chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Great story! _
SheriyLyn chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
I enjoyed the story
Penemuel chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
For something you claim to have written in only ten minutes it's really good. I enjoyed it a lot.
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