Reviews for Watch Over My Life
black.magic89 chapter 25 . 3/7/2010
This was a great chapter, but if I could make a sugestions I would say that you could potentially seperate it into two chapters. One chapter could totally be the incident with Rob, it gives you a chance to really push our buttons, and then the next chapter about her waking in the hospital. This is such a strong chapter emotionally and there is so much room for you to rip our hearts from our chests. Great job, looking forward to your update!
RooFaDoo chapter 25 . 3/2/2010
oh my god oh my god oh my god oh my god!


Rob is dead. right? or at least very badly beaten. something..

update soon!
JWood chapter 25 . 3/2/2010
Drama! yey drama!

I wonder what will happen next? It sucks he found it that way though.

Can't wait for the next chapter!
Whew chapter 25 . 3/1/2010
Hey, this chapter is a bit daunting to look at without any paragraphs. If this is not intentional (because it very well may be), could you please add some in?
mcluver455 chapter 25 . 3/1/2010
Please don't have her die! A great chapter!
moonlitmidnight chapter 25 . 3/1/2010
WHAT? They can't break up... How does this make sense? I can't believe Jake thinks it's ok to leave Jess at this time... How is that right? Douche bag! And by the way... I hate Rob..I wish he'd die...stupid little fucker.

I'm very angry right now. So please update soon!
luke33 chapter 25 . 3/1/2010
i really like this story you've created. the characters are awesome and relatable...
M.Bianca chapter 25 . 3/1/2010
can you please repost this with a few paragraphs? thank you!
xlittleredtearx chapter 25 . 3/1/2010
the spacing is all messed up.
CoralKay chapter 25 . 3/1/2010
oh my gosh! This is heart wrenching!

But couldn't Jessica live after the pregnancy? Would there be a chance she was ok?

No i was like crying when I read this.

Please update soon!
HeartsOfDiamonds chapter 25 . 3/1/2010
Wow. Amazing story. I hope Jess still has the baby though. Update soon. :)
TrueBelle chapter 25 . 3/1/2010
couldn't she still save her baby and her through premature labor? it's possible. :'( i really don't want to see Jess die.
xxcubanangelxx chapter 25 . 2/28/2010
Oh. My. God. I was sniffling profusely by the end of the chapter... and lost of hiccuping too might I add.

How sad... I get her point of view more than his. I get his, but I can't really see myself not being able to love my child.
pbgurl chapter 25 . 2/28/2010
freaking damn I want to cry right now. :(

What Jake said about not being able to love the baby since it is taking her away from him as so sad. I understand what he means but for him to actually say it to her is like a ounch to the heart for her. :( But there is always the possibility that she can survive the cancer after the birth and Jake should try to hold on to that hope.

gosh he can't just leave her now with a baby on the way and the cancer.

-Liz :D
hkxxx chapter 25 . 2/28/2010
he cant leave her! no no no!

please update soon.
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