Reviews for I'll Always Be Yours
eaststar chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
"love you back." I understand how you wanted to use "back" in a repetitive form while keeping it rhythmic. However, "I thought I could...love you back" made it seem that the narrator didn't love the person that he/she was talking about. As opposed to the lines "you were never mine...but i'll always be yours." Otherwise, I liked how this gave me some mixed feelings. Good job!
Isca chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
"A mirror of my own." I love the tone of this line-it's very soft and profound.

"Bring you back. Take you back. Love you back. Hold you back." This 'middle' of the poem is very powerful and honest.

"You were never mine." Raw. :)
Aurora Clarte chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
I love it.