Reviews for Songs from the HEART
writingpistachio chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
I absolutely adored "Can you stop hunting me, please stop it / Please let me live normally". That was just powerful. However, it was a little too straightforward, not much use of metaphors and such. You're quite good at non-straightforward poetry like in "Unable to hold on to a game called love". I think you should explore that side, the metaphors and similes and everything, a little bit more. ]

Cheers!

Victoria
Amai Dolciumi chapter 4 . 11/14/2009
This is sad... I know the feeling... yeah.
Amai Dolciumi chapter 3 . 11/14/2009
Yeah... that's what it's like to have a crush all right. (As though you need confirmation right? Eheh.)
Amai Dolciumi chapter 2 . 11/14/2009
Good, but I think you meant "yay" instead of "yey."
Amai Dolciumi chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
:(