|Reviews for Walk Away|
| khjgfhjhvg chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Wow. Nice, it kinda...stuck-with me, those last words.
Simple, and moving. :D
| Kimberly Vang chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
It's a very short poem, but it's still good. It sort of rhymes..lol...well to me that is. & of course, I like it!
| jessedaro chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
I really like how the alternating lines can be read as a dialogue or a monologue:
I had to this / we weren't meant to be/ I was breaking your heart
with the response
But I'll always love you / I should have told you / But I felt the same way
and that it all ends: As I watched you walk away. I don't know why that struck me as somehow exactly how I felt when a relationship of mine ended, and I just silently stood and took it thinking those lines you have in italics - and even though I never said the words aloud, we ended up in the same place, walking away.
Does that even make sense? ;-) What I'm trying to say is: You moved me.