|Reviews for The Road Less Traveled|
| The Autumn Queen chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Again, it feels like you've rushed this. Even for an idea whose general premise is rather common, you had some things that stood out, but cramming it into less than three thousand words I think rather spoils what could have been a well thought out, detailed, story. Especially since you started describing at the beginning. You start on images, but then toss away the nuances in favour for a single plot line. It really is a shame.