|Reviews for Theory of Oral Excrement|
| themeanreds chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
short, but effective. i like the concept a lot and i think you presented it really well. the vowels/bowels rhyme works surprisingly well, and the poem is honest, but a little humorous :) good job, i like it.
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
This made me laugh, but it's also true - it's humourous truthfulness - I loved how you rhymed vowels and bowels, it's unexpected, yet it works really well.
You could say that the 'shit' means literally swearing to the person you are speaking with, or the fact that most conversations are convaluded and very few people can actually be honest with each other. Keep up the good work.
| Noscimus chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
haha i recently noticed that bowel rhymes with vowel and that people talk shit. Awesomely haiku'd :]