Reviews for Another Piece
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
I really liked how you utilized stream of consciousness in this, and I loved the quick and vapid flow. In the first two stanza’s you used ‘screen’ twice, both pretty close together and I understand that it went with the rhyming of the next line, but it did feel a bit muddled. Keep up the good work.

Much love,

Juliet.