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now that's a happy end

Once again, AMAZING story! Im definately glad i decided to read it. You've created such an interesting relationship to read about and it was really gripping because of all the new vampire problems that kept coming up. And the ending was definately unexpected, i really didnt know how you were going to deal with the conversion and i loved the twist that a human hunter mucked it up out of nowhere. It definately mixed things up a bit and was exiting to read. Also you really helped lead onto the sequel in the last paragraphs, with Emma listing all the problems they could now face, but that paragraph had some really long sentences in it which were hard to read.

Once i got into the story i really loved it, but i have to admit i didnt like the first chapter very much because it completely glossed over the earlier part of the relationship which made me not want to read on because we didnt know Terron at all and he seemed like an important character at the time. I relise that this was because Emma was relating the events to us and it was sorting setting the background, but i think it sort of made me worry that their wouldnt be much depth to their relationship in the rest of the book becuase of how it was started. But it was literally only that chapter.

The characters again were unique and i found Terrons gran and great-gran the most interesting.

I loved this, it was fun to read and i definately want the e-book but i think that Thoughtless is a better book in terms of the writing. Dont get me wrong, im not critising this book at all, its certainly eaier to read than thoughless because its not as angst-ridden but i think i prefer Thoughtless slightly more.

I cant wait to read on to the nest one!

Hm.. you write pretty good, plus you don't have many grammatical errors. :)

The main complaint i have about your writing style is that you should spice it up a little bit? Like, try not make it into a monotone love fest? I love the fluff but I dunno, it needs more adventure for me. :)

but but but but but i want her to become a vampire so they can live forever~! D':

GAH YOU SCARED ME IM SITTING HERE CRYING WHY DID U DO THT? ok my rant is over now but thank u so very much for not letting him really die and for letting them get back tgether

muchos lovos ;D (my purpose fail at spanish)

~heather

WHAT? i usually wait until i read the ending before i comment but WHAT? U CANNOT KILL HIM I FORBID U~! . please please dont kill him? :DD

Dude, in this age of fictionpress paranoia I must give you mad props for keeping your story up and the whole making it available for download thing is pretty generous. I really liked this story. I like the little twists and turns you added to the popular vampire genre. The characters are sweet and actually believable together. Thanks for the stories.

lmao at the Fatal Attraction reference. I loved that story, and I love this one too. :D

I LEAVE ALL THE LOVE I HAVE! BECAUSE I LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED IT!

sorry, gotta go, (my mom's going ballistic) but be sure this was absolutely amazing and I

i'm very sorry I haven't been reviewing..but I just cna't stop! I fought with my mom, haaha...she wants me to get off...but..

going back right now!

i'm just so engrossed that I'm not reviewing! lol but this is so god :)

aww, the poor chicken :(

Ri

This story was amazing! I'm at a loss of what exactly to say! Your characters touched my heart with their unique personalities. Even your story line was very interesting and different. I loved it! Now to the sequel!

just like she said, "perfect".

This was the best vampire story I've ever read. So damn funny, I love your humor and I hate shoe shopping too.

Absolutely great.