I'm a bit upset that there wasn't any Seth in this chapter. I hope that he'll be in the next chapter. I did like this chapter all though it seemed like it was just a chapter to get us back into the swing of the story. I look forward to reading more.

That's one very interesting relationship Ari and Seth have going on. Looking forward to seeing how it develops over time.

Aww I love Seth. lol.

Idk about other people but I thought it was a good chapter.

Still good! lol. )

I think what makes ur writing so good is that I can picture everything in my mind like a movie. And also, I will definitely be a follower lol. )

This is a really good start! Your characters are beautiful so far. I can't wait for more. Please update soon :D

There's a few grammatical and spelling things, but that's okay. You'll rub those off as you write more. And, just curious, did Seth go and buy that chapstick with a certain chapped-lipped girl in mind? Cuz that's so cute :D

Wow, this is really good writing. ) keep it up!