Reviews for almost but not quite
thursdays and rain chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
you describe things wonderfully here.. and i love the format.. keep writing!
Eponine254 chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
I like the sense of movement in this poem... It's very buoyant! You captured the sense of reaching up to the sky through your positioning of "fingertips-", and I particularly liked the "Tepid applause." Much warmer applause from me!