|Reviews for The Ring of the Queen Book I Discovery of the Ring|
| BPQueen20 chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Wow this story is freakin awesome...please dont stop writing... im actualy not gonna read the other stories until you finish the rewritten chapters... again awesome story
| dru83 chapter 8 . 3/31/2010
I'm really liking this story so far. It reads very smoothly and there's almost no spelling/grammar errors. The story is very believable for the most part. The only thing I thought was odd was the part where Stacie has the attendant put vodka in Tania's drink. I find it hard to believe that an attedant would slip anything into someone's drink without them knowing. Also, are they 21? I think you had said that Stacie was 20 earlier. So, I don't that this part is believable and the story would work fine without it. Anyway, I really like what you've got written here and I can't wait for more.
| a99515 chapter 8 . 3/25/2010
I like it. Tsars? Not yet. A Romanov? yelp. Fun yes, action yes, This story is a awesome one.
| a99515 chapter 7 . 3/2/2010
Yes another chapter that is great. Telling you all about fear. This great story is a action packed,well written,pice of art that needs to de read by all
| a99515 chapter 5 . 2/11/2010
Much better the story just runs smother now. Way to go, a lot of thought went in to this change and it is for the better. For new readers this story is well worth your time so read it