I loved this oneshot! It was so interesting to get Jonah's POV. My heart broke when he realized at the end that he could not confess his feelings for her yet. :( But Jonah is literally the best and I love his character more because of this one shot.

This is so beautiful and sweet, I like this point of view of Jonah loving Grace all along. Thank you! By the way, I just remembered that I haven't finished 100 Letters yet but I bet I will finish reading all the stories in the Sun series first. You're a great story teller.

I still love this, so much. Thank you for your characters and stories and the parts of you that are imbued in them. Jonah and Gracie in particular are like my comfort food. Glorious comfort food.

I'm so glad I read this before I read the actual story! When I finished this one I was like 'WTH' but I saw the comments and it lead me to the trilogy that you made. I really enjoyed Gracie and Jonah the most. I like that he's so stuck up ad all. Reading this frost made me realize how much she felt for Gracie even if it took him years to confess how she felt.

I liked this. Not because of The Princess Bride, even though it is a damn good movie and an even better book. I liked it because it didn't end in sparkles and rainbows and glittery unicorns. They didn't get their happily ever after. Did you say that this one shot was a part of a story? Multi-chaptered story? I'm off to find it.

oh jonah..my lve :( he really suffer.

Ah, the young ones of this world... AMAZING story

Awwww

Jonah, you adorkable lawyer, you.
And that's all I have to say because he makes me go thump thump. xD

This makes my heart go "thump thump".

Hi! I don't know if you'd remember my anon name, but I reviewed on 100 Love Letters. It was the first story by you that I came upon. And it was so awesome, so i checked on your bio to look for other (most probably awesome) stories. And I pounced on TFtS. I was on chapter 14 (and extremely enjoying the story) where Jonah was confessing to a thoroughly soaked Gracie that I remembered the reference of fax machines in one of your summaries. Actually, I was drawn to read it first (before TFtS) but when I read your AN, I reserved this story for later. Sooo, back to my original point, I read this midstory of TFtS and I'm just floored (and I don't know, killed? I think I just died, several times) by Jonah's sweetness (for me he is) and depth. He's just the kind of guy that would make me squeel. Shamelessly.

And I think this story deserves more reviews. I just fucking rolled on my bed squeeling like crazy and feeling conflicted whether I should smile or cry coz Jonah is so selfless. Shutting up now. You're just so awesome writing these sort of stuff. I just love you, it's official. XD

Can I just fangirl for a moment? *fangirls all awkwardly*

Ok, I'm good now(:

I am 100% infatuated with Gracie and Jonah.

This whole series is simply extraordinary. It may have just become my favorite story on this website. The characters are very developed, and it's extremely well thought out and original.

Thank you so much.

I'm excited to read your sequel when I get to it!

Brittney(:

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I need a Jonah.

god dat jonah ...smiply fucking awesum lOVE jonah:)