sequel?

Cute! The title was even perfect for this one shot. I'm totally incorporating "my heart went thump thump" in my vocabulary.

i like this a whole lot more than i liked "to feel the sun". with "to feel the sun" it was too boring. at first i was simply like "when is it going to get exciting?" then it turned into "jesus when is this boring crap going to END?"

i actually started liking it when Jonah gave his confession to Gracie in "to feel the sun".

i read this because i love Jonah. Jonah rocks! \m/ xD

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Gah I know I'm supposed to read this after To Feel the Sun, but I couldn't help it. I saw it... and I had to peek. I feel for Jonah. I'm only on chapter 5 of To Feel the Sun, but I hope she ends up with Jonah. :D

Wow that was so swet

Poor jonah :(

It would be so cool if u could continue it, like another one shot abot he both of them. The ending just tied in very nicely

Totally cute

More Gracie/Jonah! You have no idea how happy reading this made me :) Totally love the title of the prequel - it's so cute :D

I Really Really REALLY Like This

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The Plot Was Interesting And Unique And With The Amount Of Time I Spend On Fictionpress ... That's The Biggest Compliment I Can Think Of

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Jonah is adorable!:) Love this!:)

Aw. This was so adorable. :)

I feel like i should review your main story first, since I read that first, but I just couldn't wait when I heard that you had done a oneshot with Jonah & Grace as well, that I ended up reading this and now I have to review this first. I love this. Jonah is so amazing. I love him and Grace. I'm so glad it was them. And such a mature, sad viewpoint, I don't know. But it makes me really warm inside, and I'm really glad that Jonah could see the truth in everything too. Like he knew what Grace needed. I don't know. I love this story, and this one shot... and reading this just puts everything that I just read in a whole perspective of things. Love this one shot, and I usually don't like one shots at all, but I guess that's because usually I feel like they don't have enough time to develop, but since I just read like 19 chapters of the rest of the story being developed, I guess I feel like everything works out pretty nicely. :) Grace & Jonah are great together, that is all I have to say. Thanks so much for writing this!

- Alyssa

:) God, I just love him so much.

I'm really glad I found you when I did. The order in which I am reading these posts makes me very happy. I'll be starting on your story about Danielle and Devon soon. I'm excited, to say the least, and I really felt for her in "To Feel The Sun."

aww jonah! whatta sweetheart. totally love this prequel. i'll move on to the sequel soon, though those two as a couple doesnt really do it for me. i'll probably change my mind when i actually read it.

After reading To Feel The Sun, I was happy to know that you made an one-shot and with Jonah's pov nonetheless. This was really cute and I'm so happy that Gracie and Jonah end up happy together.

Aww it's cute but oh so sad :(

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ali

Hey, I love this story and "To Feel the Sun," but after rereading this one-shot for the second time, I've noticed that you type a lot of commas in places where there really doesn't need one.